Let's see here
As i'm listening to this, it doesn't sound bad, first thing i noticed is that that the bass synth at the start might be a little bit too low. it gives it a unique sound tho.
i like the diversity in this song. also the kick sounds a little bit dull.
This just needs a little bit of work here and there.
Keep it up!
9/10 5/5
PS: Would you mind checking out my latest track?
It's a dance remix of the megaman 3 stage select theme.
Peace out.
-Noisebringer