Dude :D
It really does sound nice, BUT, You should really go FLS,
( I used magix too before as u can see in my first few tracks )
even tho magix has some nice presets and all i still think FLS is still alot better
I kinda hate magix for the premade melodies :P
wich makes it kinda unoriginal
but what the hell it still sounds nice,
Even tho i cant give u any criticism about the '' instruments '' u've used :P
it kinda gets repetitive after a while
Some small parts are lil' bit off beat, Like when the vocals + beat are at the same time u can hear that the vocal is offbeat,
Or at 4:50 everything just gets messed up badly, I know u cant help that cause its a bug( i've had it too in the past )
Anyways for the rest, U did a pretty nice job on the buildup imo, and from ur first song ur improving :D
On to the nex review XD
Weemeee AWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY :D